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| 123454321 2007-10-25 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem has an almost seamless rhyming scheme, except for the second line. I really enjoyed this poem; the summary grabbed my attention, but the piece itself held it. The flow of every other line ending in "now" is beautful. That is my favorite type of rhythm (personally). -J.A. |