It was cute. I loved the end though. I felt bad for the girl, Carley was it. I can't remember, so I guess you could have mentioned her name in it a little more maybe. Well I'm sorry I didn't review soon. I do know its the last day and usually isn't the best day to review things. okay I'm rambling sorry.

~Everything to you

What a great story! I almost never read here anymore because its hard to find good writing but this story was just so much fun and so well written. I'm adding you to my favorite's list!