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| felicia13 2007-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so vague (yet oddly specific) that it was awesome. No lie. I was like, "what is going on here?" the entire time, but that's what I like about this. Straight forward was not the way to go for Rites of Passage, a tricky and vague topic in and on itself. Nice poem, darling. Love, Felicia. |
| Burnt Bread 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abusew00tcakes. It seems as though I'm the first to review this piece. There's always a visual appeal to the way you structure your poems. The bolded, the capitalized... they anchor the poem. Green, glistening fear would have to be my favourite combination of words here. Bread |