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felicia13
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseI hope you don't mean you put a link as part of the story. FP doesn't have support for links or even just the web address. Put a dotcom in something and it just sort of deletes it. It sucks, but it's true.

Um, onto the poem-song-thing. I liked it, especially the last line. It's quite beautiful and reminds me of the feeling I get when you first start to feel autumn in the summer air. It's a lovely feeling. Ever get it, Bread?

Felicia.
WyrdWolf
2007-10-29
ch 1,
abuseI really like the last three lines of this, Bread. I'm definitely going to see if I can check out that .wav file (let's just pray this computer can handle it).

Wolfie
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