This was so inspiring. You write so vividly and I love how the relationship of the mother and daughter flows. I wish you could of made it longer, and maybe write a sequel to it!

i really liked it...the girl seemed kinda emo but shes cool..i see the whole anne frank vibe you were going for...although i really hope brittany dosent die at the end..lolz keep writing!

it was amazing how i could just see the images going on in my head. you wrote it so that it was like a movie that i wanted to know more about.i like how the mother keeps trying to escape her age and her daughter is annoyed by it.(latin)"mater molesti"...i forgot what mother is in accusative so don't be telling me im wrong on monday.also, somehow it kinda reminded me of 'anywhere but here'

This is very cute. I definitely liked that it was more about the girl's relationship with her mother than her relationship with Nick. The scene that you ended with emphasized that fact and was really endearing too; Brittany and her mother dancing together was a great way to capture the fact that they could love and enjoy each other even though there were a lot of other times that Brittany had a hard time understanding her mother (like when they're driving home in the red VW).

Long time no hear! I wished I was able to go on the computer a few days ago just so I can say Happy Belated Birthday. When are planning to update? As always I am a vey big fan.