Reviews for Sweet Release of the Perfect Storm

simpleplan13 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abusethe descriptions and word choice in the piece are awesome... I also love how you italicized that part... the only thing that I didn't like was the first and last stanza each have one line that seems too long with the rest of the lines.. other than that the piece is really awesome
blackrosestears 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseI absolutly love this part: Hush, sweetheart, I’m here. Can’t you see how I made this for you? Everything about me aches for you. I love that part so much. Good work.
Emily Black 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuselike a pearl dropped into a lake of life...it not only says much, but transfers the feelings to the reader in a very fluid manner. I absolutely love the last line..