I really enjoyed this. In fact I enjoyed it so much that it makes me want to write a mecha story. :-)

Like you, I'm a fan of Battletech - although, saying that, your Gladiators sound more like powered armour/Elementals than 'mechs. :-)

Wow, well done. Well written with good characterisation and an interesting plot stirring in the background. The characters were quite likeable, and the action was extensive with a formidable place; your descriptions were as good as always and the way you use your terminology...lol, I need to learn from ya! The ending...hmm...so what was June’s decision?

By the way, I never said I am a fan of Gundam! I like the new series, Gundam 00, but that's the most Gundam I have ever watched in my life! I saw some random episodes from some random series, but that was all...You really don't know me at all senpai! .

Aside from some double wording and other minor grammatical errors.

Other than that, this as really well written and I liked it. Good plot, good character development even for a one-shot.