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I'm confused... Did she die or didn't she? "that she could have died, and it wouldn't have surprised anyone." - I figure you were trying to make the author's note sound like part of the poem, but I think it would work better if you just put it in the poem to begin with.

Heartbreaking, mournful, beautiful. :)

Zaijen
-Shan-

faithless juliet... is that referring to the user on Fictionpress or other? I like this poem a lot. Well written. Great job. You are talented! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^