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| HFGLF 2008-09-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseSuperb job on this chapter. You've really captured the characters in a simple storyline made complex. I love how you depict the inner-working of the human brain and your characters are suprisingly realistic, despite their situation. Truly a work of a great authoress. I look forward to the finale. This story has come a long way. |
| Utena Himemiya 2008-09-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseI'm really glad that Zia believes again. I like the subject matter of this chapter and to be truthful, Miko was my favorite character! I can't wait to see more of her in the final installment! |
| Tragedy of Light and Dark 2008-09-04 ch 6, | abuseThings certainly like to try and crush Zia. It's because she's so sinful I think, lol. This is definitely a lot better then your other chapters and I'm definitely anticipating your final installment. It will be kind of good for you though because you can say that you've finished a story for once! Lol! |
| Tragedy of Light and Dark 2008-09-04 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great chapter and probably your best yet. You know, I didn't think that I'd like this story as much as I do now. The first chapters were kind of Blah, inspirational but blah then at about chapter 3 it got interesting and from 4 on it had nice action in it. I can't wait to see what happens next! *goes on to read more* |
| Iruka-sama 2008-09-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseIt's weird seeing a continuation on this chapter when I'm used to a current issue being resolved on every chapter. These last two have definitely been your best chapters on this story. You went from making simple problems complex and the inner workings of the human brain brought out to complex problems and paranormal phanomenons being brought to light and discussing the powers of fate and divine intervention. This is truly a good story for religious people in my opinion and I can't wait until your final chapter. |
| SilverIsamu 2008-09-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseI really like Miko. Zia gets on my nerves though. I can't wait until the final chapter! |
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-09-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow, Zia is really hard headed huh? I can't wait to see how Tsurugi finally is able to get his past back. I've been wondering what his relationship with Miko was the entire time. |
| Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-06-22 ch 5, | abuseI like this chapter. I like Yagyu as well and I think that his predicament is a wonderful and tragic one indeed. This was a happy, yet sorrowful chapter and probably my favorite right behind the man dying. Ever noticed I like chapters that deal with death? Oo; |
| HFGLF 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis was interesting in many ways- First off, it was about a graveyard and what Tsurugi thought about them in general. I think the same or pretty close to it. They can be many things but most people view them as sad. Chiharu and Yagyu have a one in a million relationship and they are very developed even though you'll only see them for this chapter. They are so unconventional and he seems almost crazy to drink her ashes and eat them like he does but in a way, it's poetic and beautiful and even romantic for him to do so. I like how Tsurugi never judges, he simply makes observations. I think our angel is learning a lot and now that I'm reading Sacrifice, I can see what a big change he's been going through. |
| Utena Himemiya 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseI like this chapter because it's a romantic type chapter and I'm a romantic at heart. Tsurugi has odd views and I really like Chicharu's story. Was it based on a real event? It sounds like something similar I've heard about from something- don't remember what though. Yagyu really loved his girlfriend enough to drink her ashes and still mourn her. I doubt he'll find someone else to be with since he's so hard-set on her. I envy relationships like that. |
| Iruka-sama 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow, it's haunting yet beautiful and shows the depth of the human bond. I like the subtle messages you deliver with these chapters. It brings a good story about. Too bad we'll only have two more chapters before this ends. |
| SilverIsamu 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseThat was great! I like Yagyu ad Chiharu's relationship! |
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is beautiful and probably my favorite chapter next to the little kid one. I really like this story's peaceful nature. You have a great talent and I hope that you can do more with it! |
| Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-04-23 ch 4, | abuseA very touching chapter. I really like the outlook on a subject that most people would find morose or depressing. |
| Utena Himemiya 2008-04-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis chapter was really short. I wonder how many written pages it took up? Also, I really liked the death scene but I think it could have lasted a bit longer. I know it won't have the dramatic feeling as a story character death but I think more things could have been said. Other then that I have no complaints. This chapter was surreal feeling and peaceful even if death was present. |