All in all, a beautiful story with great visuals and an emotional, uplifting storyline. It was definitely a wonderful read and a classic among stories.

I didn't like this chapter as much as the others for some reason, I guess I don't really care for Zia that much. It was a good chapter, however.

I really like the symbolism and darkness of this chapter. Such a sad thing and a love the truly does transcend time. It's a beautiful story indeed. I'm really liking this. It's a great companion to Sacrifice.

Such a sad but uplifting chapter. I like the relationship between Tsurugi and the man. Such a sad story but a realistic one. Life really is like that and it's good to see Tsurugi open his eyes to what the world is really like. Perhaps he can help it mroe that way.

I like the spark of hope that you present here and the relationship of the angel and the child. It truly shows that there is hope in the children of the future.

I like the way that you put insight on the cruelty of humans and how prejudice and uncaring they can be towards people who are different in more ways then one. Sometimes I truly think that society is doomed.

Fabulous chapter and great portrayal.

Definitely the start of something that shows great promise. It's a little typical but I think it was probably that way for a reason.

This is a very good ending to this story. Everything is set right and Tsurugi learned a little more about the world. Good job on a fabulous story!

The power of miracles and belief in oneself and religion. Very interesting though I didn't like it as much as I did other chapters, then again, I didn't like Zia that well so it's just me, I think.

Nice chapter!

Very interesting and deep with a great storyline behind it. Yagyu and his girlfriend were very interesting people that show the depth of a true loving bond.

Very sad but celestial and uplifting in a way. It kind of makes you not fear death and more view it as a peaceful thing. I really liked this chapter and it's probably my favorite so far!

This was a very touching and cute chapter. I had very good visuals of the rainstorm and resteruant. Very cute.

With that kind of attitude, I'm suprised that he's not a dark angel already lol. Tsurugi is definitely different in this story, much more of a pure and kind person then a tragic and sad soul in Sacrifice.

I wonder what future chapters will hold?

It's kind of a typical start, where the angel falls but in an inventive way. I never would have thought of a rocket launch in the same way. Now I'll start thinking about when NASA launches their space shuttles, lol.

Interesting end to a very good story. I like the build up to peace with this one. I have a feeling that Sacrifice will not have such a happy ending (for either angel) I think Crimson and Clover may but there is only one chapter posted so I cannot be sure.

Tsurugi has changed a great deal and it is definitely note-worthy.

I like Zia and Miko but I think my favorite character was the dying man. He seemed like a sweet guy. I also liked the story with Yagyu and the ghost and the little girl in the rain. Those were the most memorable to me.

I don't care if anyone thinks that this is an ordinary story. Those who do refuse to see your true meaning as a writer. Also, I'll be posting some Sacrifice fanfiction for your story as well as a piece that of original fiction from myself.

I hope that you'll check out my works. Good luck with your future stories, I'll be waiting for your final chapter on them as well.