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| Kelpylion 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuse"and I am rooted/to none of these histories.../I am rooted to none of them." The first stanza on its own felt so much like early adolescence and the second so much like this beginning of adulthood. I adored the movement from leaf-vein roads which seem so spontaneous and youthful stretching out ahead...to the deterministic histories to which you are "tethered" but not rooted. hooray for realism. ~K |