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g 2007-10-29 . chapter 1
wtf. I say smash the **'s face to a pulp.
felicia13 2007-10-28 . chapter 1
Oh my god. I'm actually crying. That was so sad and part of it's because it's true and it happens everyday and the other part is the way you described it.

The only CC I can offer is the make the first paragraph a little clearer. I thought it was going to happen... and then it did. But your words get a little smushed together in the beginning. That's it.

Beautifully written. I can't say anything else about this. It's amazing, the way you did this without actually saying what it was straight out.

Felicia.
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