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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-29 ch 3, | abuseAww this one is so sweet! My fav out of all 3 chapt. Keep it up! XKristie MarieX |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-29 ch 2, | abuseReally good flow for such a good poem. Most authors can't end a short poem well. Nice job. XKristie MarieX |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 3, | abuseAwesome, they're short, but express a lot, written really well, great poem, keep at it! |
| lisagal 2007-11-07 ch 2, | abuseheyhey. very interesting ryhme and rhythm going on! short and to the point! very understandable. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseLoved how it ended nice work! Adding it to my favs. Kristie Marie |