3 points:
I. harlot= amazing word. props on that one, also for "semblance"
II. I really like the free verse, and the way it flows from confusion into understanding and regret.
I. Consider some more creative punctuation, as well as stanzas. I know the document manager makes that difficult, but it really adds something to have it organized.

ALtogether, great job. I enjoyed it :)

I feel the same, as if letting it slip away. Never let it slip away. Never!
I like this poem, thanks!

Nice diction and imagery. I espeically liked the line, "Bruising kisses down your throat." Keep up the good work!