aw, that was cute but really sad. (

i can empathize though. (pardon my poor spelling.)

good work. keep writing. )

This is amazing! I love the ending, but my favorite part is the specific length of the song.

I love the creative title and how the theme carries through to the ending. And I also like that you added in the "four minutes and forty-one seconds" because it shows how well the narrator knows the song.

Freckles!

I'm in love with this.

:-)

Nath