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| Fabian Cortez 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseYour turn of phrase and use of metaphor is as always wonderful. KEEP WRITING! F.C |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. I like the title. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| AuraBorealis 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abusegood work. nice job with all the details |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThis flowed so well. It was one of those times where you just glide through the words without having to slow down or read over parts more than once. I love the abstract nature of this poem. Also, 'tongue-tangled-tango‘s' is just a plain awesome phrase. You should have used that for the title. Once again and always, amazing work. Peace, Daze |
| b-U-b-TRUE 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Beautifully abstract. Well done! |
| Julius Gillian 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the relaxing flow of this piece and the way you describe the friendship between these characters. Very pleasent. |