|Reviews for City|
| rust phoenix 11/12/07 . chapter 1
I like the format. I think the second stanza is the strongest, and the first line really drew me into the poem.
| Lyrical.Love 11/11/07 . chapter 1
| Twilight Starr 11/9/07 . chapter 1
| AuraBorealis 11/9/07 . chapter 1
nice wrok. keep writing
| ZombieMcQueen 10/29/07 . chapter 1
I liked this starting out, as I can emotionally relate to the first four lines, but then you kinda lost me with the metaphors here. it's nicely done, I just got confused as to where you were going with this.