|Reviews for Overdue|
| Twilight Starr 11/9/07 . chapter 1
Beautifully written piece. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.
| AuraBorealis 11/9/07 . chapter 1
nice work. keep writing
| ZombieMcQueen 10/29/07 . chapter 1
wow. just simply..wow./ this is one of the most amazing and emotionally felt things I've read of yours. it's poetic, and yet it doesn't want to be such a way anymore.
| Polka Panda Rockstar 10/28/07 . chapter 1
I love the 2nd to last line:
"And as she chokes on glass fragments from the falling of the sky, she mutters out a copper-scented overdue…."
Very compelling, powerful line. Great work.
And might I just say that I love that OneRepublic song in your profile. GREAT taste.
| brittle hearts 10/27/07 . chapter 1