the ending is very powerful... I also love the forth line and the lines about what couldnt heal it... nice job

Hm...I don't know what to say. I'm not sure how to take this poem because I can't grasp the meaning very well. One more thing, what is vicodin? Very nice job.

-C.N

Somehow emptiness is more troublesome than the stuff filling it up (though that stuff has it's own problems...).

Nice incorporation of vicodin (I keep typing vidocin... The spacebar might backfire...). I like the flow of this poem and the strong imagery and feelings you bring out. The first lines alone grabbed me, then this is ended very well also. Italicizing "it" was like the frosting on the cake for a poem. I like how it's almost a riddle because you only mention a cache in the title and you give no indication of an empty space, but I like that. You leave the reader to think a bit more and concentrate on the qualities you're bringing out.

I have no suggestions for this poem. It's strong and wonderful. Fantastic job!!

Write on!!