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| sketchingaCYNiC 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abusethat was. the. cutest thing, ever! hahaha. |
| d666lisa 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseORIGINAL AND BRILLIANT |
| NeonCrayonz 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseIt made me laugh. :) It has got to be one of the best one shots Ive ever read. |
| multiples of six 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is adorable! =) |
| clara12 2007-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abusereading the bit: “Oh my God!” I rolled down the vandalized window and glared at him, pointing a finger. “How the hell do you get off flicking snot onto other people’s cars?” I yelled, wildly gesturing. I cracked up laughing so hard! i have to admit, an original idea. even though i do it, i found it quite gross that he was openly picking his nose. lol nice work |
| TheGreatSorceressRheaa 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI love this story Its really funny and cool in a sick twisted fun pump up way. lol if you understand that. |
| Miss. Drizzle 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseHahahhahah, OMG, That was REALLY good. And funny too! It was so cute! *sighs* That story made my day. Keep writing! ~Miss Drizzle |
| Lily Llynn 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseHaha this is hilarious. (: I loved the fight/argument scene. XD I got a bit confused near the end; I didn't realize it was Sarah who got into the accident with Matt. Actually, I'm still not sure. =P But maybe that's just me. XD This was excellent otherwise. (: |
| Lorango911 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abusehahahahahah i didn't even get to the actualy dialogue and i was in cracking up... ya know, i was waiting for my mom to pick me up from bart and there was this dude standing in front of the curb waiting for his ride i guess, too. I was behind him so i could strategically stare at him without being noticed. That, and i had sunglasses on. But that's beside the point. The point is, is that he lodged his right index finger up his nose and was digging in there pretty well. Like, he was wiggling his finger trying to get out whatever it was that was stuck up there... THEN he went and proceeded to wipe said index finger on the hem of his shirt... I thought that whatever he was searching for up his nose was safely removed.. but no he dove right back in, with the same finger, with the same enthusiasm... i wanted to laugh so hard... he did the same thing about three more times... after that my mom finally came and i wasn't able to see what he did with that grody right index finger... hahahahahah and then yesterday on our way home from watching 'Things we lost in the fire' there was this guy and his family stopped next to us and was picking his nose... but who knew you could actually meet someone cute doing exactly that same grotesque gesture... hahahahaha and STILL find said person cute... lol i liked the story... too funny for words.. and how'd he get the hand sanitizer.. did he reach in on the passenger side and grab it? CLEPTO! ok love you bye! |
| sputnik sweetheart 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abusehey al! this is cute! and you're so unlike the main character in this story - you're always staring at people in their cars! anyways, this is really good. you should submit this for your writing placement exam. you would totally get a 10! (i forgot how it's scored). |
| J.S. Goldberg 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseHaha. Wow. This was absolutely hilarious. It was very different but I liked it. Yes, what he did was gross but it was so funny that two adults were fighting about nose picking. Haha. I thought this was great. Nice work! |
| Pop the Bubble 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abusehehe that was supremely cute =D good work i lovess i'm putting on my alerts =D |