cant wait to know what happens next. keira sorta deserves it.

look, look, look, im reviewing!! very very very good scary.. what will happen next i wonder?:o

dear scary
i finally read it. its really good, i like the way u discribe dmitri going into vamp form, i can see it! i've told u this before but i love ure italics at the start and the end of the chapters, there absolutly beautiful!! were do u get them from? do u make them up? coz there awsome!
things to work on would be probable the discribeing of the rebels, you keep discribing them as men, but i wasnt sure if they were vamps or deamons or anything. also cieran says e was held hostage with a knife, can vampyres be killed with a knife? how do u kill a vamp. i think u should explain that.
other wise very god, love ure work!
luv fat boy xoxox

Soul-mates, love triangles, wowzers! I wonder who her soul-mate is... hmm...

The Shadow Daemon... how very peculiar... There always has to be new challenges in the way. There was just a little grammar error (adding commas where they weren't supposed to), but everyone makes those mistakes all the time.

Wow, lots of events, and Keira falls in love with Will! Yeah, falling in love with a Vampire usually includes bloodloss.

Oo, the suspense of the unknown. Now I want to know what he wanted! Haha. Anyways, I like the detail in this chapter.

omg i love your story must have more can't resist please hurry up and update i'm dying and it's only been 2 minutes P.S. your descriptions of the characters is magnanimous.

hello darlz i read ure story and i like it very much!:) i ecpeacially like the italic writing at the start and end of each chapter.

Very interesting chapter. All the character seem to have a goofy side to them, lol.

Interesting start. I think some more emotiona dncharacter development would be nice, you tend to tell instead of show. A few grammatical errors here and there, nothing major. Good luck!

Feather La

That is so like girls, buying "skanky" clothing. When are you going to have Vlad and Amber talk, not just mention him? I don't that made any sense, but whatever.

Gosh, I wish I had green eyes! Guess this is a bit corny, but it was kind of weird to read the story since my name is Amber. She seems to be in an awesome postion, 3rd in line. Lucky Duck...

I really enjoyed reading this so please update again soon :) Chatsworth House sounds amazing, lol I want to live there.