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XsilentXescapeX 2008-03-30 . chapter 1
I was confused when the summary said emogothdepressing and then there were unicorns but i liked that they ended up stabbing eachother. lol my favorite lines:

"My world is full.
Who said it was full of
Happiness"

~silent
windy girl 2007-11-08 . chapter 1
I thought it was nice. I like the part about the rainbows and stars. Hearts that bleed seemed a little cliché & "unicorns are stabbing each other" ruined some of the mood. In my opinion, it's a tad out of place with the rest of the poem. Still nice though.

-pb
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