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Between All Of You, And Me
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis
2007-10-29 . chapter 1
Something similar to what I've been through. Awesome.
sylvia's syndrome
2007-10-28 . chapter 1
Interesting work. I like the back-and-forth style of the poem. My only suggestion would be some punctuation between the two "sides." Keep writing.
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