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| Devin-Jamie 2008-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseThis was really the first time you wrote in first person? Weird. I think I write mostly in first person. And this was incredible for a first time. Incredible for any number of times, actually. In my head, Peter was Heath Ledger. In 10 Things I Hate About You. That's what this reminded me of. I love that movie. And this. It was great. great great great great great :] |
| Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh! that's brilliant >.< thanks so much for writing, keep up the great work! |
| Written 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseundoubtedly awesome! love how your story just flows and everything goes together perfectly. poor dev dev and her cheating ex! at least she found someone who will hopefully bring out the "best" in her. very unique! |
| andee lee 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseHA!! Sweet revenge. Man, that was so great. Ryan was a little bit too much of a selfish **, but that was the whole point, right?? I love it when the good guy wins!! Great story :-) -Andee |
| lovely 2008-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read the entire one shot collection. But this would always be my favorite. |
| Bob 2008-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseSweet! |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseHAHA this is cute! |
| beeyouteefull 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely amazing! funny, sweet, angsty, and violent! Perfect! *adds to faves* |
| thecoconutbubble 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it. But dang, now I really want to go smash up a jerk's car. Well done. |
| Frozen.by.Sloth 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm grinning. ... ... yeah. I'm grinning like a fool. :D This rocks. I love the one-shot. It's silly, awesome and completely freeing. x) thanks for sharing, I loved it x) |
| RavensWritingProphecies 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Just...fabulous. The characters were really well written and interesting even though it was a (relatively short, as in just a one-shot) short-ish story. Great job! :) |
| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOoh, Devonny has a backbone! This was an AWESOME oneshot. I loved how she got the lipstick from the random girl, that was priceless. And Peter...well, he isn't the normal prince charming of the story, but I really like him for that. Somehow, I imagine Ryan as James Marsden. Do you see it? |
| Angel of Ink 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI really love this one shot. It's really good. :) I added it to my c2 for oneshots. |
| cherrypiesizzle 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was really great. I LOVED IT! lol |
| Kara 2008-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse"I swung the bat high in the air and shouted, 'I am woman! Hear me roar!'" I almost died laughing. Great story, by the way. |