This was...good. It did not crash to some devistating end, but rather dropped despondently and resignedly into a grave. I loved the personification in "tired love" and the image of "kisses desperate." Thanks for writing; I enjoyed the read.

It gave me chills downmy spine, and yes thats a good thing. I like it, makes me think and want more but I am very pleased by the outcome.

Thank you for all the reviews and time you spent reading my work, I am greatlly thankful.

Maggot.