Reviews for Tapeworms And Other Parasites

Reviews For: Tapeworms And Other Parasites

Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseThat's an interesting POV, certainly! The first and last sentences are awesome, and the middle's pretty great too. I like how calm the character is about the parasite-- with any other character, this would be the most boring scenario ever! So I guess what I'm saying is that this is a brilliant idea with wonderful execution. I'm searching for a criticism...and searching...and...I guess that I have a problem with the fact that the character claims to be out of touch with her insides. I would think that shutting off your mind to the outside world would leave pretty little besides insides, right? Especially because she's going on this rant about them! So, I don't know, that line irked me-- but this is, again, quite well done!
Chopkins 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. I really like the term "divorcing myself from my body"; I thought that a nice, creative way of articulating that idea.
shakeyourheaditsempty 2007-12-10 ch 1,	abusethis was lovely. & very original. as far as i know. i did love the line about "so many people under my clothes."
.mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-11-06 ch 1,	abuseInteresting analogies and metaphores. -STIX-
almostanna 2007-11-04 ch 1,	abuse"I had let so many people under my clothes that under my skin was only a small step further." That was just wonderful. I love this metaphor and the way you used it; it's original. Good job.
servatis-a-pereculum 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseCreepy, disgusting, awesome, very well written! It seems like something that should be performed!
luv me like no other 2007-10-31 ch 1,	abuseWOW!
RandoMaia 2007-10-28 ch 1,	abuseWoah. I'm glad I didn't read this any closer to dinnertime. I like this, though. It's well done, if very creepily so. I'd actually like to hear some more from whoever is telling this. Good job. (Way to be creepy...)

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