Hauntingly beautiful. The descriptions were perfect; it was easy to picture, and it felt like you were really there.

I like how his name isn't mentioned; it makes it seem more mysterious.

You did a great job with it!

~YukinoKara

Wow. That was really emotional. Great detail. :D I really liked it.

I didn't expect him to die though. :( I thought it was, BAM, going to turn into fantasy where he turned out to be a mermaid or something.

But I liked it, I really did. :D Keep going with the writing. :D *favs this story*

I loved how you wrote about the ocean. I could clearly viualize it in my mind. In fact, it made memiss my old home on the shores of North Carolina. I wanted to be back in the ocean...until he died...It depressed me, but that's what you wanted this peice to do, so its all good. Overall, great job!