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Reviews For: From the Shores of Long Island

Cannon
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was really emotional. Great detail. :D I really liked it.

I didn't expect him to die though. :( I thought it was, BAM, going to turn into fantasy where he turned out to be a mermaid or something.

But I liked it, I really did. :D Keep going with the writing. :D *favs this story*
Mercyette
2007-11-22
ch 1,
abuseI loved how you wrote about the ocean. I could clearly viualize it in my mind. In fact, it made memiss my old home on the shores of North Carolina. I wanted to be back in the ocean...until he died...It depressed me, but that's what you wanted this peice to do, so its all good. Overall, great job!
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