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Reviews For: Label Me Fragile

Basara
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abusea calm soul... perhaps?

nice...
Litheral
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abusePowerful words. Your last line is six syllables though. Traditionall for a haiku it's (5-7-5) :) But I love your poem. Keep Writing!
sleeping Pisces
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseInteresting and poignant. I really like this haiku, well done.

Peace, Daze
Faithless Juliet
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abusePowerful narration, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
Undrahas
2007-10-29
ch 1,
abuseBasically saying you can label me what ever you want, and I will still not pay any attention becase I know who I am, and you don't.

Nice poem.
-Undrahas
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