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| Basara 2007-11-05 ch 1,  | abusea calm soul... perhaps? nice... |
| Litheral 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abusePowerful words. Your last line is six syllables though. Traditionall for a haiku it's (5-7-5) :) But I love your poem. Keep Writing! |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseInteresting and poignant. I really like this haiku, well done. Peace, Daze |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abusePowerful narration, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| Undrahas 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseBasically saying you can label me what ever you want, and I will still not pay any attention becase I know who I am, and you don't. Nice poem. -Undrahas |