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| capricioso 2008-03-17 ch 1,  | abusesydney, hon, the underlying emotion seems to be kind of draggy; three stanzas talking about just about the same thing is kind of long. but i honestly like it. alisa |
| Klutzilla 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseHope this review will be enough inspiration. :) Very powerful poem, it seems to have a lot of emotion. GOOD JOB! Don't run out of inspiration, you're a wonderful writer, keep writing! I'll sell a first class ticket on a plane back in. :) (what does that mean?) |
| Tytherpol 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abusethis is clever esp the last two lines haha nice piece |