Very nice! I really like how you portrayed each character in that they were all very distinct, despite it being a short piece. The whole thing made me happy, especially around the interactions of the three lovers, and the support that the other artists gave him. Wonderful short story!

Great first chapter! I really like the way the characters interact. I love reading your work. You are really twisted chick, and I really mean that as a complement :-)
Can't wait for the next one