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| none of burt's beeswax 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abusei really love the idea in this poem, how much do we really know about the people we claim to love. i'm not sure now clear the ring part is, though. i got confused until i read the title again. and just one other note: it should be bends, not bents. |
| ten pts above average 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abusethe beginning was good. the 2nd stanza sortve confused me. make sure you proofread before you submit, mistakes can ruin it. but I did like this. the ending was great. |