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none of burt's beeswax 2008-02-24 . chapter 1
i really love the idea in this poem, how much do we really know about the people we claim to love. i'm not sure now clear the ring part is, though. i got confused until i read the title again. and just one other note: it should be bends, not bents.
ten pts above average 2007-10-29 . chapter 1
the beginning was good. the 2nd stanza sortve confused me. make sure you proofread before you submit, mistakes can ruin it. but I did like this. the ending was great.
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