Everything was so good.

Awesome storytelling. I'm deeply moved on how you described the emotions of Remus while he moves along with the story. Hope to see more stories from you.

I enjoyed that, if only for the 'mystery girl'. I was quite entranced by her character. Something about the apparent naivete in her dialogue almost made me blush. I wonder, did you intend this story to have an erotic undercurrent? I picked up on one. Anyway, thanks for sharing.

- Catfish