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| The Grey Detective7 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseEverything was so good. |
| Samuel Alon 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseAwesome storytelling. I'm deeply moved on how you described the emotions of Remus while he moves along with the story. Hope to see more stories from you. |
| whonow 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed that, if only for the 'mystery girl'. I was quite entranced by her character. Something about the apparent naivete in her dialogue almost made me blush. I wonder, did you intend this story to have an erotic undercurrent? I picked up on one. Anyway, thanks for sharing. - Catfish |