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| Zonne 2008-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseAh yes, I knew that was his dad. Maybe this boy is related to the mom in the other piece. Has a soft and forgiving heart. You make me want to know so much more about these people. They have so much depth, especially considering how short the writing is. Another good job. I wonder if you ever thought about writing more on them? Z |