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Reviews For: Tales from the Land of Despair and Dreams

andthevineswillfollow
2007-11-10
ch 2,
abuseGreat use of imagery.
Crewger
2007-10-30
ch 3,
abuserhythm as in... like the oddesey... I didn't spell that right...
iambic pentameter, it can still rhyme... or like the original Beowulf poetry where there are two phrases with distince alliterations... ahh, how I explain this...
concrete poem can mean that the poem in the test is the shape of an... I don't know, an apple and the poem is describing an apple...
Crewger
2007-10-29
ch 4,
abuseI love it!! can you try something with or play with the rhythm? ohh, what about a concrete poem... seems kinda juvie but try it please? your awesome!
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