Well, I think I'll start reading more now. You're almost as good at writing as I am at sleeping. Actually, I've become a terrible sleeper lately, but that clearly doesn't reflect on your writing :D

Great use of imagery.

rhythm as in... like the oddesey... I didn't spell that right...

iambic pentameter, it can still rhyme... or like the original Beowulf poetry where there are two phrases with distince alliterations... ahh, how I explain this...

concrete poem can mean that the poem in the test is the shape of an... I don't know, an apple and the poem is describing an apple...

I love it! can you try something with or play with the rhythm? ohh, what about a concrete poem... seems kinda juvie but try it please? your awesome!