Reviews for Tales from the Land of Despair and Dreams

andthevineswillfollow 2007-11-10 ch 2,	abuseGreat use of imagery.
Crewger 2007-10-30 ch 3,	abuserhythm as in... like the oddesey... I didn't spell that right... iambic pentameter, it can still rhyme... or like the original Beowulf poetry where there are two phrases with distince alliterations... ahh, how I explain this... concrete poem can mean that the poem in the test is the shape of an... I don't know, an apple and the poem is describing an apple...
Crewger 2007-10-29 ch 4,	abuseI love it!! can you try something with or play with the rhythm? ohh, what about a concrete poem... seems kinda juvie but try it please? your awesome!