Reviews for Beneath the Glass: Book Red

Tears of Trees 2007-11-06 ch 6,	abuseI liked that chapter. When they where pealing off her skin it reminded me of when people get really bad sunburns.
Tears of Trees 2007-11-05 ch 5,	abuseI really liked that chapter. I like blade when he siad that they should start with the captain and first mate. funny
Tears of Trees 2007-11-02 ch 4,	abuseI really liked that chapter. The blood part was neat.
sarenelsoria 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseinteresting it sound alot like a poem and it is really good, also you might want to change your age in the profile tis a bit confusing. I was born in 1990 and i am seventeen.
Tears of Trees 2007-10-31 ch 3,	abuseI really liked that chapter. I think I like your unique style of writing. It is unique to say the least.
Tears of Trees 2007-10-30 ch 2,	abuseThat was interesting. it is kind of confusing but I think it is because we don't really know anything, and that it isn't soppose to be crystal clear, leaving mystery. I liked how you refered back to the diary of Akim.
Tears of Trees 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseIt seems okay until you get to the list, "the rose. The dragon. . ." it gets a little choppy there. if you want it to be like a prophecy i think it might be okay. it gets tiresome, I think, after reading the ten things in the list. it seems like you want them to be like two different groups, they are on two different lines (sorry if I miss interperated that), you might want to add something in there that symbolizes that. other than that, to me, it seems fine.