Wow, I am so impressed with your story! It’s amazing so far and I can’t wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work! I thik your plot idea is very interesting- I love gov't conspiracies! Just remember, a bit of friendly advice is to write first and foremost for yourself, not reviews. Your writing will have much more significance that way and you'll find yourself more content with it if you forget about the pressure of reviews and whatnot; they'll come along eventually hopefully ;-)