This was a very strongly written haiku.
I especially liked the repetition of the last line.
It gives a very vivid picture of strength and courage.
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true...

nice...

This is superbly written. The last line really hits the spot. Amazing haiku.

Peace, Daze

Well written. Awesome job.

This is an excellent haiku. It's a really striking piece-- the effect last line is really powerful. But really, the entire piece is strong. Keep up the good work!