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| Violent Messiah 2008-06-19 ch 6,  | abuseA good read, especially the dialogue...you captured that snotty snobby teen speak of Emma perfectly. It was so perfect I was almost hoping she got bit in the end...sorry, but she was kind of hard to like, unlike Ash. -=D The last chapter left me hanging...you need to finish this! -=x |
| Sniper LCM 2008-03-07 ch 6, | abuseAwsome story, but (Im not trying to be mean) you try to hard to make it funny. Some parts were but some just didn't look good with the story. I still love it though. I have millions of spelling errors in my first book but I'm to lazy to fix em all. Seriously awsome story! |
| Sniper LCM 2008-03-06 ch 2, | abuseWow...your really kicking ** here, I only read two chapters too. I have my own zombie books on here, there called Satan City. Trust me, if u read them, the second and third one is better. We should chat it up sometime, exchanging idea's and crap. Hey, Im only 14 but I know my zombies! |
| Karl Wu 2008-03-04 ch 6, | abuseAwesome story, one of the cooler zombie stories I've read so far. It's really fast paced, but I find that good in this story; in a short amount of time, you make the reader care about what happens to the characters. I also like Mole-Man; don't ask why, he reminds me of my brother. Anyway, keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next update. |
| Notorious Stranger 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abuseIf you do not update this soon I will mail you a container of blurple, vicious, self-distructing potatos to you! There will be three of them! Anthony, Mary Marjorie Merangue, Samantha Picklejar, and Scissors the invincible. That's how much I loved it. =P |
| V.R.M. 2008-01-12 ch 6, | abuseTook me a while to get around to finally reading your latest chapter. It's very good, you've managed to kill off all of her friends. The first person omniscient point of view slows the story down to a refreshing level. The humor allows the reader to take his or her time to read it. This way your story doesn't move along at the speed of light. I noticed you haven't updated in a while, I certainly hope you didn't lose interest in writing it. I certainly haven't lost interest in reading... |
| swfan34 2008-01-07 ch 6, | abuseWow. This is good. I'll have to read the other version (the Cell one) that you have on FanFiction. I DEMAND that you write more. |
| Kar-zid 2007-12-25 ch 6, | abuseWow Emma was mean, but anyone in that sort of situation would be a bit disgruntled. Great story, write more soon! |
| Kar-zid 2007-12-25 ch 5, | abuseCliffhanger! Great story, I'll read on now... |
| Kar-zid 2007-12-25 ch 4, | abuseAwesome story, you've mixed humor with horror very well! |
| Kar-zid 2007-12-25 ch 3, | abuseGrreat story, so now Bri and Ryan are dead. |
| Kar-zid 2007-12-25 ch 2, | abuseSo this story takes a different turn, great idea! Now it's completely original! |
| Kar-zid 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I read your other one, so now I'm reading this one! |
| lil'mama617 2007-12-03 ch 2, | abuselove it!! |
| Casey Jones 2007-11-30 ch 6, | abuseThis was a great new chapter! Very sad though, but a little heartache can make or break a story, in your case, it made it better. Weird thing is, it was already super good! So be proud of your achievement! |