Reviews for And I Can Never Get it Back

windy girl 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseHiya. :D Your poem is sweet. Just a few things: "Is you are wrong" I think that it might flow a little better if you put the 'is' on the line above. It sounds a little awkward. "For my mind is here It’s my heart that’s gone" I thought that those lines were a little too trite. But then again, I think that's an opinion thing. Anyway, nice job. :) -pb
Memoirs of a Demon Angel 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseWow Kristen this one's really good too :) I like the shadow one best, but I still really really like this one :) I need to get some stuff posted...hmm...maybe I'll write some poems in spanish tomorrow during everone's presentations