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sovereignty'd 2007-12-26 . chapter 3
Good writing so far, I can't wait for the next chapter. What makes it compelling, I think, is that this is a true event and your writing it from your heart.

I'm sorry about what happened to you. Did you really have to live in the same town, the same high school, as the guy who did that to you?! I think I would have died. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Tara-chan 2007-12-26 . chapter 3
wow, your stoy is really powerful. It's well written too. I hope this helps you on your road to recovery. As for the way you tell the story, I think you should keep going with the way you've written it so far.
Scarlette Jane Catherine 2007-12-21 . chapter 2
I am deeply sorry for what happened to you. I guess this is a bittersweet review but i do like your writing style and the way you present your story. The quote 'experience is a a difficult teacher; it gives the test first then the lesson' is brilliant. Did you make that up or quote it from somewhere?
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