Please update soon! I really like your story!! I want to see what happens with Ainsley and Duke next. Best of luck!! :-)

love the humor

great story, i didn't expect to be so drawn in...i definetely love Ainsley, reminds me of me way back, by the way i'm definetely pulling for Duke..and just so you know, falling in love with you best friend is a risk, but worth taking, and i think Ainsley and Duke are up for it...though it changes ppl, i fell in love with mine and became less of a tomboy. been with him for 4 yrs, *wink* its da best..keep up the great work.

I love big dogs.
:D
I found your story when it first came out; then our computer crashed and I lost it.
I'm happy that I found it; you're a superawesome writer, and I love your characters and style.
So...keep being awesome and stuff, kay?

The whole Seth things seems OK, she told Seth that she didn't like him, but I'm not sure why everyone's upset with him, or why she won't be his friend anymore. That needs to be explained a bit more.

Wow, I just stared reading this story today and I am, like, already in love with it. I hope you continue soon because I will be eagarly waiting

Hmm... constructive... well, I'd like to get more background on Kamryn. She seems a little one dimensional at this point. But other than that, this is awesome! I really like Danny's character, and I can't wait to find out what Duke's dare was!

[my computer's being stupid and won't let me see the verification thing, so I can't sign in, but I'm pretty sure I've reviewed before]

I definitely like this chapter, i liked the little fight scene with Seth and Duke [and Danny]. The only thing I can suggest is to not use so many parenthesis in one paragraph or sentence, it was hard to follow. Especially in the contrast between Cassie ad Kamryn.

Also, and I'm really doubting this, was that a bit of foreshadowing with the movie selection? The protagonist falls for her twin brother's best friend? I had to go back to the third chapter for this but Tigh Matthews? Described as an Artboy, I don't know if he was mentioned otherwise.
Even if that wasn't the plan, a possibility for a twist maybe?

Anyways, I would love it if you actually answered that. You can use my pen name or my email, doesn't matter.

F2B

Still lovin' it. =) Like always. Saw a few places where you left out words or some such. But no big deal. I can't even remember what they were, elsewise I would tell you. :\ Sorreh.

Didn't really see the point of this chapter except for the whole Seth-thing. But that's okay! =) Filler chapters are needed, too. And we do need to see the interaction (however unpleasant) between Seth and Ainsley. Woo!

Til next time!
Shoe.

Ugh! I'm so confused with what guy I want to choose. It's like she went from no guy to two guys, but she doesn't know that quite yet. I love Dramatic Irony.

great story. Ainsley seems a bit cruel O_o...tomboyish, but still strange. Would she make a good gf? I only hope so...

Wow..very nice. A bit too long for a chapter, though. And a few minor spelling and grammar errors. Ex, 'concernedly' isn't a word, just like how I use 'boredly' :P
And man, is your profile LONG! Haha. You should really use the quote at the end of mine xD
I just cleared up mine, so it's nice and short and very un-me.
Back to story: +1 point for tomboy protagonist not being cliche.

Hello there! ;)

Haha well, most of what I wanted to say was already said over MSN, really. Anyway, DUDE, that was a very bad place to stop! What on earth's that dare about? (Knowing Duke, it'd probably be something hilarious yet idiotic...) But it was nice having a third person POV here. It gives more perspective. Sticking to one POV tends to limit the info you can get from the narrator/story itself, and it'd be cool if you could implement that sporadically throughout the story.

I'm a little concerned about the speed the story is going - I think you could have put a little more mystery into the Secret Admirer thing. Unless, of course, it's not Seth Andrews, but that's pretty much solidified. It'd help to have a confrontation of sorts, or a love triangle, which i think you're going for... booyah ;) It'll be interesting to see how this all pans out.

Great characterisation, though, darling! All of them have their own distinct personalities. It's really easy to pick them out and know what they're going to say or act. I really like that! And of course, the whole clichedness of everything. You better update with chapter 7 soon!

Till next time,
Louisa

I like it. I like the dialogue because it works and is tight. I like the descriptions of the scenes because they set the environment and the people into it well.
It works. Wonder how it work as a play?

AHH! you updated!! yay! the ending is oh-so-very suspenseful...(: