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Undrahas
2007-11-01
ch 4,
abuseOh are you talking about someone in thse little poems of yours? I think you are...

2,3,and 4 was good. Keep them coming ok?
Almost-human
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseI had no idea of why it was so short...until I read the reveiws...
Faithless Juliet
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseI love the imagery focused on the first two verses, and then the wrap up at the end was a wonderful conclusion. Well done.

Much love,
Juliet.
Undrahas
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abusenice haiku!
LaLuneD'Argent
2007-10-29
ch 1,
abuseCute!

I didn't realize it would be a haiku at first, but the brevity definitely works for it. It's adorable :D
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