Pretty interesting ending =D
I didn't see that coming, good job, the only problem is that it was very short!

I liked it, reminds me a little of a japanese horror story XP
I like the way you wrote it, and I really don't have many negatives to say, except that maybe when his parents were talking, you should have placed some quotation marks... pretty creepy ending, nice beginning =D
I'd love to read more, so you'll probably hear more from me!
Lata!

Beautiful! I loved it. You have a great gift for writing, and it clearly shows through in this fiction.

This is a pretty strong beginning. Don't leave me hanging like this because you cut me off right after you really get into the story.
Does he hallucinate?
Is he a drug head?
You gotta get the goods out.
I'm still lovign this.