Very nice ending. Definately answers all the other questions before. :) great work, but just work on the other things i listed in the other reveiws.

Good chapter, but again remember to start new paragraphs when someone else speaks. Also, this sentence caught my eye, "So he agreed to come back with Sharon." This sentence was rather confusing, perhaps a rewording is needed...

Good chapter, but some words of advice: When a new person is speaking, a new paragraph should start with it. Also, some words here and there are mixed up in the sentence. Lastly, I've noticed you tend to write more as if you were telling the story to the person reading, which is okay, but sometimes you want to get away from that feeling, because most people will become bored with it. Not saying your writing is boring, you just might want to work on putting a few cliff hangers here and there or putting more mystery into it so the reader would click the next chapter button to read more because he/she really wants to find out, instead of just "lemme finish this story b/c i started it..." Do you get what i mean? I hope so... But other than that, as always - amazing imagination!! XD

Good prologue, but maybe a little too descriptive... afterall you want to draw the reader in with the prologue, right? this one kinda seems like a summary of the story...