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coloring 2009-05-15 . chapter 1
:O A lot like love - great movie, i loved it very much.

so is this story! it's just so comical, i love it :) hehe and the girl's happiness is so fun to read about.
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-03-01 . chapter 1
I was dying of laughter...she stepped on his back and he had to go to the hospital and wear a corset!! Oh my goodness...I'm shaking as I write this. Oh dear. This was just too hilarious.

I especially loved this line. 'He grinned. “You’ll have to take care of me all my life, and even when I’m 80, senile and circling trees, you’ll have to make me waffles every Saturday morning.”'
--Senile and circling trees? Hm.

Anyway, I LOVED it! You did a superfantabulous job. :)
toffeecakesxox. 2009-01-13 . chapter 1
AW, the end was so ADORABLE! *squeal*

Very, very cute! I loved the build-up. :D

-Kristy. :) // toffeecakesxox.
Green Eyed Angel 2008-12-28 . chapter 1
It's fine. It's FUN! It's pretty cool, though the guy having Zac Efron-like hair? Not so cool. But otherwise, it's pretty damn funny and sweet. THough no kissing scene? WHAT?
futureauthor852 2008-09-06 . chapter 1
LOVED IT!! As I do all the other one ive read. ..And she kept her word..awesome, but until he was 80?? does that mean that on his 81st birthday she is free?? lol, love it, again..~Angela
Hazelnut Romance 2008-08-16 . chapter 1
sounds like they got married in the end.
JaseyxRae 2008-07-25 . chapter 1
haha here I am review you again. your ending suprised me a little bit because it was even sweeter than ur other ones cause they obviously got married (AND MADE WAFFLES! lol i love my waffles. sorry :P I'm a nerd) and that was just super-cute! ah ur stories are awesome!
Forever Me 2008-04-08 . chapter 1
omg, hilarious. nicely done
ess3sandra 2008-03-22 . chapter 1
just so so qute
Sarah Allie 2008-02-27 . chapter 1
So amazingly CUTE! I especially loved the last line. I was actually squealing when I read it. Great job :D!
Sarah :) x
HelloLovely 2008-01-16 . chapter 1
Omg! The ending was so cute. Like when I was reading the anything I thought it was funny, but then I saw the "She kept her word." and I thought it was the cutest thing!

Love,
Becca
bookworm925 2007-12-25 . chapter 1
so they got married, eh?

hahaha... it was nice! ;)

make me one please?
thinkTwice Nfall 2007-12-08 . chapter 1
Aww, you write such wonderful one-shots. I love all of them. This one made me smile a lot, and the last line was so simple but... I don't know, amazing? (Wow, I need a better vocabulary. Ha ha.) I just really liked how it was simple but.. not at the same time? ... Okay, I'll stop trying to explain myself now. XP

Do please continue using your awesome writing skills!
woodstock1969 2007-11-28 . chapter 1
Aw, that was adorable! Sketching strangers in the park...that's so something I would do. Actually, I've done it before...haha. Anyway, I loved it!
Lily Llynn 2007-11-28 . chapter 1
Ah! Another cute, fluffy one shot! (:
I love getting review replies (almost as much as I love getting reviews, the latter of which doesn't happen quite so often) and yours was no exception. (:
Someone (the wicked monkey) beat me to the chase by adding this one, but once again it was suggested by xoxluurve, if you wanna thank her. (:
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