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| vaudeville summers 2007-10-30 ch 1,  | abuseAh, very nice last sentence...it's very calm actually given the turmoil that fills the rest of the piece, even though the narrator seems highly detached from their surroundings. I also especially love the line "It was a poem of bullets and sounds" Beautiful. ~Deanna |