Ha, that was quite funny. I liked how you developed the story even though it was timed and I must say I found it interesting :)

When I have a timed essay or something like that to do, I've got so many ideas I can't fit into the damn story so I can't do it to the best of my ability as I like to take my time over things. But you have impressed me with this and it really turned out fine I must admit xD

What actually inspired you to write about violins? Is it something from past experience or are you just interested about musical instruments? And yeah, my dad is like that sometimes when he complains about me leaving late to go somewhere thus being caught in traffic lmao. Glad I'm not the only one.

Anyway carry on with the good work and I hope to see your stories very soon.

I thought the narrative was really good, and carried through. your characterisation was nice too. The writing style was nice too- the only criticism I have is the title- I don't think it lent anything to the piece.