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| Carousel Chorus 2008-01-11 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful, I absolutely adore this, I love the "back then, the vision of purity/was blurred/ and now, blackened-/"absoolute power corrupts absolutely" bit. Amazing job! Thanks for the reveiws! |
| simpleplan13 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI really like the ending... "a different story/an alternative ending" are 2 awesome lines |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, again, sad but I really like this one, too. You're a good writer. Keep it up. = ) |
| stardustfaery 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI like it! It kinda reminded me of the stuff I write but with better ideas. That sounded dumb, okay :) |
| Aquafied 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuse“absolute power corrupts absolutely” -very true it seems slight themed toward the idea of costumes must have been the date. |
| The Postscript 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseReally, really vivid. I love the message and question you present at the end. I especially liked the image "like the darkening prayer/held by pale hands-" - what a stark, moving contrast! Keep writing, k. |