Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: e n d

Carousel Chorus
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful, I absolutely adore this, I love the "back then, the vision of purity/was blurred/ and now, blackened-/"absoolute power corrupts absolutely" bit. Amazing job! Thanks for the reveiws!
simpleplan13
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abuseI really like the ending... "a different story/an alternative ending" are 2 awesome lines
smile for the sunshine
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abuseAw, again, sad but I really like this one, too. You're a good writer. Keep it up. = )
stardustfaery
2007-11-14
ch 1,
abuseI like it! It kinda reminded me of the stuff I write but with better ideas. That sounded dumb, okay :)
Aquafied
2007-11-11
ch 1,
abuse“absolute power corrupts absolutely”
-very true


it seems slight themed toward the idea of costumes
must have been the date.
The Postscript
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseReally, really vivid. I love the message and question you present at the end. I especially liked the image "like the darkening prayer/held by pale hands-" - what a stark, moving contrast! Keep writing, k.
Return to Top