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lael1bologna 3/4/09 . chapter 1this is truly amazing! |
Anz Pineapple 10/29/08 . chapter 1wow :-) i like this a lot. a lot of feeling. intense poetry is the best kind :-) |
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle 1/11/08 . chapter 1Beautiful, I absolutely adore this, I love the "back then, the vision of purity/was blurred/ and now, blackened-/"absoolute power corrupts absolutely" bit. Amazing job! Thanks for the reveiws! |
simpleplan13 11/23/07 . chapter 1I really like the ending... "a different story/an alternative ending" are 2 awesome lines |
smile for the sunshine 11/16/07 . chapter 1Aw, again, sad but I really like this one, too. You're a good writer. Keep it up. ) |
stardustfaery 11/14/07 . chapter 1I like it! It kinda reminded me of the stuff I write but with better ideas. That sounded dumb, okay :) |
Aquafied 11/11/07 . chapter 1“absolute power corrupts absolutely” -very true it seems slight themed toward the idea of costumes must have been the date. |
The Postscript 11/2/07 . chapter 1Really, really vivid. I love the message and question you present at the end. I especially liked the image "like the darkening prayer/held by pale hands-" - what a stark, moving contrast! Keep writing, k. |