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| Chocolate and Lies 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuse*flailage* I.LOVE.IT. |
| Dani P 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseoh brother..another sappy love thingy ;P. i like the dude..until the end..it reminds me of caleb calculating his love for scottie :-D |
| fairytale failure 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was very cute...I am a gushy romantic so of course I love when he says 'I already have.' However, I think it would be helpful if you set the scene for us in the beginning, as for a while I was under the impression that this was happening at your dinner table possibly with a sibling. So at the beginning, work the place into it - the library or a classroom? |