 fairytale failure 2007-10-30 . chapter 1Aw, that was very cute...I am a gushy romantic so of course I love when he says 'I already have.' However, I think it would be helpful if you set the scene for us in the beginning, as for a while I was under the impression that this was happening at your dinner table possibly with a sibling. So at the beginning, work the place into it - the library or a classroom? |