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| xXvamp-obsessionXx 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseI think that this is a good story and that you should definitely continue but if you want my opinion, you'd get a better response if you changed your summary. I make it a point to read stories if the summary is bad just in case the story is good like yours but most people don't read stories that don't explain anything in the summaries. I know that I usually don't read things that say "just read"! It's an awesome story, I just think you should change the summary if you want more feedback. ~Kim |