OMG!
a very shocking, yet happy ending...
at first, i was a bit disappointed because Adelina is ALMOST wedded to Callum...
yet surprised and happy when Caine returned and stopped the wedding, but her mother did announced it

i really like it

It was AMAZING. Not bad at ALL. And why won't you write any more stories? I'm not trying to make you guilty--I'm rubbish at that--but I DO think it's a shame.

This is such a wonderful piece of writing, though! You have to write on FP again. (: It's a beautiful one-shot with beautiful characters and a beautiful setting. (: I love the plot, I love how Lori and Callum are together (figured that one out), and I love the clicheness of Caine coming to "rescue" her at the end. (: Hehe. I'd love a more definite explanation (reasons) for the whole kidnapping and etc., since I don't quite know what the reasons were, still. However, this was an amazing oneshot, (good for your first non fanfiction work!) and I might try to guilt you into writing more non-fanfiction. Hehe. Oh, and of course I'm very glad the wicked monkey added this to our c2. (:

soo adorable, i loved it

Aww, that was really adorable :D
Loved it!
-Aria

why did she have memory lapses and forgot who she was and stuff like that??

This was lovely. I felt it rushed a bit at the end, but it was very cute. Well done. :)

I'm going to have to try and make you feel guilty! I would LOVE to read more of your stuff if I got the opportunity. I LOVE THIS! This reminds me so much of my childhood favorite film, The Swan Princess. It was like a time machine for me. It was adoreable and I love it so much. Now I'm going to go dig up my old, probably worn-out Swan Princess tape, and I'm going to watch it tonight... nothing wrong with cartoons is there? No, I don't think so.

Love,
~Dia

I really liked it. it was short, but not too short and it was very interesting.

This is a really good short story. You should expand it and make it longer and more detailed. I would LOVE to read it if you did. Thank you for writing this. It was really good!

-Briette Julienne Laures-

what are you talking about? this is a great little oneshot you have here! it's so innocent and cute. so fluffy! great job!

great story...I like it so far

Gosh..what a cute story. I really enjoyed reading it!